Careful, I almost got bored...
I thought it was good to start with, but it didn't really build up to anything for me and ... oh, soz, it just got to 02:00 and built up... good, I was about to get bored with it. I just think it kind of stayed the same for ages at the beginning then suddenly, it built up too fast. and there was too much at the beginning. If you make the beginning a bit softer it might be easier to build up the rest and I think it would sound better.
I'll give you an eight because I did like it from 01:45 onwards.